All Calmness
All calmness on the waterfront
Not a breeze to urge a ripple
The willows have all they could want
to sun and drink just a little.
The dark, quiet lake whispers soft,
a soul singing of its living.
It sends its powerful force aloft
and rejoices in the giving.
But, the eagle knows, as it flies
painting the clouds above the lake
sees the form with its eagle eyes
leaving behind a loathsome wake.
In the deepest, of the water dwells
something that doesn't belong.
Where the lake is heavan, it is hell
and it sings the blackest song.
It soaks up all that's negative
and grows with each passing day
so that the lake, as it is, may live
until finally comes, the breaking day
when the shadow in waters deep
comes forth, full of sadness and grief
at once, too large for the soul to keep.
A beast in need of relief.
It rises from the water, black and cold
a spree of killing to release its pain.
A young demon...eternally old
and intent on destroying again and again.
Slowly, so slowly, the beast becomes small
every step and blow depletes its source,
until, at last, the dark shade falls
travelling on its fated course.
But even as the creature dies
the eagle sees a new something born,
tiny now in power and size
yet growing now with every scorn.
And the dark, quiet lake, whispers soft
a soul, singing of its living
It sends its powerful force aloft
and rejoices in the giving.
The young poet wrote this transparent analogy many years ago. While it works WAY too hard to keep the syllables just so, I think it still works and has something to say. More importantly, it hints at the style the young poet had already started creating at 20 years old.
Thanks for reading, off to write!
Cheers,
Casey
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