Luna's Night
The moon she shines so clear tonight
So large, lustfully bright
Reflecting back through our own eyes
Takes breath through our own sighs
We hear, each look to her in turn
From our own night we yearn
Our minds leap forward, dance across
Before the silver’s lost
As all restraint and fear departs
We show our sinful hearts
We tell our story to this gem
In sweet embrace of whim
She gives, this sphere, to us tonight
Sweet song she sings her sights
Of all the souls she’s held in sway
Before there starts the day
And then the fleeting dance is done
There comes too soon the sun
And we recall with sad delight
Thus gone is Luna’s night
Casey Freeland 2011
Isn't it nice the romantic slant we have put on the moon? Just watching the moon inspires feelings like you write in the great post.
ReplyDeleteHey Casey, I'm catching up on my reading and see you've made a change-- It looks great and I look forward to your new direction-- This poem is sure a great start.
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Oh I like this one very much! Especially, the part where the 'sun comes out' :) I also like how you make her quite lustful, and then make her the sweetest thing (not) on earth.
ReplyDeletethat was beautiful!
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